Thursday, March 15, 2012
Our Groups Rough Draft #1 + Reflection
1) We are trying to represent the main emotion which is guilt and honesty.
2) I really like the openning scence were the whole entire class is talking it really brings out the feel of an actual class. I also really like our title plan toward the end.
3) We still need to complete the whole film clips especially well, mostly all on editing.
4)What my group and I need feedback on would be how are cuts look? Do they actually flow together?
5)One of the challeges we faced would have to be how we didn't have all the clips editied. I believe with all the filmming we did was pretty good. The only problem would be putting our entire clips together. Other than that I'm pretty sure we got we just need to get on the ball with this.
FEED BACK GIVEN BY MARIA FUENTES AND DEMI FRIAS
ReplyDeleteSTORY:
IN THE MOVIE WE BELIEVE THE CONFICT IS AN INTERNAL CONFLICT ABOUT A STUDENT WHO CHEATS ON HER TEST BUT IS GUILT RIDDEN AND CANT DECIDED WEITHER TO CONFESS OR NOT.
SHOTS AND RISING ACTION THAT CONTRIBUTE TO THE RISING ACTION:
are the close up shots of alexes when she finds out shes the only one who did good on her test. Next is a shot of her actually cheating witch acts like a flashback . Then it goes back to alxses face and her expression shows she is thinking about something. when the rest of the class is excused alexes stays behinde and the teacher notices there is something wrong with her.The teacher askes alexes if she is ok and alexes just looks at her with a painfull look in her eyes.
Suggestions for the rising action:
you could shorten some shots.
you could also add music to emphasize the mood.
The climax occured when alexes aproches her yeacher and tells her teacher that she did indeed cheat.
during the resolution the teacher explains to alexes how disappointed she is but the all she has to do is retake the test and gives her a weak of detention.
You could add to the resolution by giving more closes of face shots of expressions, that gives us the idea that alexes is relieved and is happy she did the right thing.
Camera shots,variety,effectivness,specific shots that acheved a certain effect:
We especially like the close up shots of alexexs they really cature her emtions and it makes the video easier to under stand.
EDITS:
scale od 1-10 i would give the edits a 7.
one edit we would change is the long shots of carissa walking out it takes up sometime that could be shorten.
Sound effects and music:
there was no music until the end and the music in the end was GREAT WE LOVED IT.
CREdits and TItles :
i believe they are not done with their credits and tittles but they ones they do have are also creat they really capture and tie together.\
OVERALL:
We thougth your film over all was very well done. What we liked best was the story line and how you guys choses to use great camera shots to portray it. Our Strongest suggestion for you is just to add music and shorten up your film a bit.